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The question for this Origins Blogfest is: When did your writing dream begin?
This is how it happened...
He sat quietly beside me and whispered in my ear; it felt like a cold draft to my right.
The two nights had passed quickly; two bottles of wine and several empty food containers overflowed the trash receptacle at the end of the desk as evidence of occupancy; they would be long gone before the next guest checked in.
I arrived home before my daughter; made a few snacks for the both of us, and waited.
Fed and relaxed my daughter inquired, “So, how did it go, let’s hear it.”
I began to read; close to ten thousand words had been written and when I came to the end my daughter opened her eyes and stared at me; for a moment I wasn’t sure what to expect.
She asked, “Where did you find that? Who wrote that?”
I was stunned and lost for words. I had written it, well, he had helped, but then how do I tell her about him. So I explained it and she nodded then said, “Whoa...that’s a story on its own!”
Another month passed with the deadline fast approaching, I hesitated sending the first chapter; that’s all they wanted - the first chapter and a synopsis. I sent only the chapter...no one gets the synopsis unless I get a nod.
I knew I didn’t meet their criterion, but that never stopped me before; I wasn’t published and I didn’t have an agent - there wasn’t enough time to try and fulfill either before the deadline.
The outcome of my follow through was remarkable and promising; some letters where exchanged that altered my path in a positive way.
Fast forward a year later…
I attend the SIWC (a three day writers’ conference) and risk everything by having a blue pencil session with Carol Berg, it changed my life forever.
Her words I will never forget: “Here is where you’ve hooked me, I want to know what happens next.” She commented on the voice I wrote in and the way I talked to the reader; but then I reasoned it’s his story, not mine, it should be in his voice.
Sadly, the author ultimately chosen to pen the much anticipated sequel did not meet with the great success all had hoped for. The greater sadness was that this chosen author had lost sight of the unique voice the original book had been written in - much to the frustration of those it was written for.
Had the time been taken to understand the original book a sequel would never have been entertained...the obvious path can often be the one that hold the most obstacles.
Suffice it to say my work will be published, but not as a sequel. So it is written, so it shall be done.
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Well...are you intrigued?
When did your writing dream begin?
Jenny

And make it so!
ReplyDeleteI'm at eighty thousand words...a few more to go and book one is done!
DeleteGreat story Jenny, it's great to hear where your influences came from, sorry to hear that your second piece didn't exactly match your first one but that happens to even the finest of authors so you're in good company at least!
ReplyDeleteWell, if you really knew "who" was influencing me it would make for a right interesting story, as my daughter said.
DeleteThe original piece was not mine, nor the poorly thought out sequel - someone else can take credit for that.
I am working on what "should" have been the choice - but the corporation that originally set out to decide the fate of the original book miss a critical component: the book was never written with a sequel in mind. This is a problem I've discovered when writers attempt to "finish" other writers' work - not good!
Awesome. Once I realized I could blog and tell my stories/memoirs, it began immediately. Thank God huh?
ReplyDeleteHey Barb - you're right, this is a great venue for letting off steam and sharing what shapes our lives. I'm always intrigued with what's going on in your world.
DeleteThat IS intriguing. Let it be done! :)
ReplyDeleteA real plot thickener, for sure! If I was so inclined I think the journey I've taken with this project would make an interesting read as well as what I'm working on.
DeleteI was even hesitant to write as much as I did about my writing, for this Blogfest, for fear of letting the cat out of the bag! One day all will be revealed! :)
I can't wait to read it!!!
ReplyDeleteAnd I want more of that back story too!
Who was this mysterious man?
Rev - Thanks for checking in! I hope the suspense doesn't kill you!! (then I'll have to do time in that joint of yours, eh)
DeleteMysterious man will remain a mystery a little longer...
I didn't really have a dream. I started writing some articles online when an online friend talked me into it for a little extra cash. Than she talked me into starting yummy stuff. I started welcome to me when I wanted to write other stuff about my thoughts that didn't fit into articles or recipes.
ReplyDeleteRuth - I think both your blogs are excellent! It's great when friends point us in directions that help inspire us to find our inner voice and talents. Good luck with yours! Smiles, Jenny.
DeleteI'm more than intrigued. What a fantastic post! I'm definitely left wanting more. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by, Julie - ah...the intrigue! I didn't expect it to have quite this affect (oh, who am I kidding, of course I did). The wanting of more is always a good thing! Smiles, Jenny.
DeleteOh, wow, I know Carol. She's a Colorado writer and a regular at our conferences. I've taken all her seminars and chatted with her between classes. She's awesome.
ReplyDeleteHi L.G. - Carol rocks! When I recount my experience, both in her workshops and sitting opposite her, during my blue pencil session, it's like it happened yesterday - her words of encouragement are the pilot light on my writing furnace! It burns steadily...guiding me on. Yes, she is awesome!
DeleteThanks for stopping by and taking a read! Smiles coming your way, Jenny.
I AM intrigued! Who is the man?? Are you going to tell us? Let it be so.
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Tracy Jo - I love seeing your smiling little avatar, here in my comment section - thanks for dropping by! I should be asking you, "Who is the man??" - Your V Day picture was so cute - as I said, best V Day post I came across!
DeleteAs to my mystery man...he will remain a mystery a wee bit longer! Smiles, Jenny.
Sounds like a cautionary tale - be true to yourself above all else!
ReplyDeleteBotanist - Good call, being true to one's self is my top priority...hence the perseverance and my relentless pursuit of putting this particular wrong to right (or write, in my case)!
DeleteThanks for dropping by and checking out my Origins post!
You are an amazing writer. You have me captured every time I come here.
ReplyDeleteMynxy, my dear friend...thank you for your kind words! I value your "behind the scenes" support - you are one of my lucky finds out here in the Blogosphere! Hugs to you, Jenny.
DeleteSuch a fresh and unique way to tell an ORIGIN story! Well done! Intrigued to the max!! :)
ReplyDeleteComing from you, Mr. Hammons, :) this comment puts a big smile on my face - thank you! I'm glad you were "intrigued to the max"!
DeleteAnd...thank you for hosting this insightful Blogfest!
Hee hee! I know who you are talking about! ;) And YES! You are finally finishing it!! I am dying to read the rest! GO MOO GO!
ReplyDeleteMiss CP - You are the thread that binds this whole journey together. I'm blessed to have you and your creative spirit in my world...from the time you were a little girl to now, you have been my inspiration. I cherish your support and your encouragement...I hope I always have them.
DeleteLove, Moo (aka your Mom - just in case you forget)
I am curious! Would really like to know the answer to the mystery, like who's the voice? Is he cute? Does he have an earthly form? Is *he* You? Is he your evil twin? Is he the good twin? Does he long to share more stories in gentle whispers? I like whispers. *grin*
ReplyDeleteLove how you've shared your Origin!
Hi Scarlett - what a inquisitive comment - I like it! Your mind ticks like mine...a curious mind is one that never ages! Lean in a little closer and hear my whispers...there is no great mystery here, just bits of a puzzle still waiting to be found.
DeleteThanks for stopping by with your inquiring mind! Smiles coming your way, Jenny.
OK, that's a great hook :-) 80,000 words *whistles* that's impressive.
ReplyDeleteHi Li - I'm glad you found yourself "hooked" - I'm getting close to having this book ready for the next stage! Cross your fingers! Cheers, Jenny.
DeleteWow! I am blown away by your experience and the way the character talked to you. I write a story not long ago, where the MC literally kicked in the doors of my brain and took over. I definitely have to read this.
ReplyDeleteMelissa - what a great statement "kicked in the doors of my brain and took over" - WOW! That is so visual...I like it! For me, my the writing is about creating just that...I want to give just enough to make the reader feel they have some vested interest in continuing because their own imagination has been engaged.
DeleteThank you for dropping by - it's a treat having you here. Smiles, Jenny.
A bit tough to get to 212 people in one day, so I'm sorry for the late Origins blogfest visit. Great story. What a fascinating character he must be for you to listen to him. I'm intrigued now. I wonder what his story is.
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Nutschell
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Hi Nutscell - His story has long been told, only now some evil demon ran amok with it in a sequel that never should have been...it's my task to set the Universe right, in his world!
DeleteThanks for stopping by; reading this; and adding yourself a a follower! Smiles coming your way, Jenny.
Did Bouncin Barb unlock the mystery? Well HE certainly wasn't expecting a sequel! This was fun, and I look forward to reading your mystery when it comes out! Julie
ReplyDeleteHi Julie - thanks for stopping by. I wished I could say the mystery will be unlocked - but alas, it is still to early for such revelations. In time... Smiles, Jenny.
DeleteGo for the gold Jenny! Add me to the list of admirer's of the girl that "Set the Universe Right." Thanks for your visit to Dream Weaver. Come back often.
ReplyDeleteHi Debra - welcome to Pearson Report. I'm please you stopped by.
DeleteIt is my goal, in this instance, to set things (maybe not the whole Universe, but a good corner of it) right. I'll be back to visit Dream Weaver! Smiles, Jenny.
Nice story! that's impressive.
ReplyDeleteThanks Jeremy - coming from you "impressive" is pretty sweet! Now...that wouldn't be a White Lie, would it... (I've got your book on my must read list - sounds intriguing) Cheers, Jenny.
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